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Reviewer: Gotta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 01:15 pm Title: Agent Mac: Pixie the Cat Burglar

LOL, great story! Like the clueless teacher, Tim's writings, Abby's attempt to introduce the subject of DNA to a pre-schooler/kindergardener and most of all, little Chad! And Pixie, of course.

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Date: 10/19/2012 11:40 am Title: Agent Mac: Pixie the Cat Burglar

A very cute story, I enjoyed the family relationship between Chad and his parents, the story Tim told was great fun and I loved the reactions to Abby's DNA comments. Super little story!

Author's Response:

You're the first to mention Abby's DNA thingie. ;D Had to put that in. I can just see Abby forget the fact that Chad's but a little kid.

I hoped you'd love this, Madeline.

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Date: 08/23/2012 10:43 am Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo

Oh Lins that was just so hilarious, now I can fully read and review as mine is finished and it has been judged, it was just so funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks you, Patsy. hug I thoroughly enjoyed writing it; the largest version even more. I couldn't send it 'through the shredder', so to speak, after stripping it down to suit the challenge. 

Reviewer: Gotta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2012 07:27 pm Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo

I liked the 2nd version best, because I too like a peek of future Tim, even if it is with goth girl. As long as she's treating Tim well, guess that's ok.

Author's Response:

I think we all agree on liking the 2nd version best (in this case the 2nd chapter) which...incidentally...came first. When I learned that was not what the challenge was really about, I turned it into the shortened version (the first piece in this thread) to accommodate the requirements. blush

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Date: 08/14/2012 11:46 am Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo

This was so good will there be more like this i do hope so

Author's Response:

The first story was actually meant as a childrens' story, so I trust you refer to the second? The one with Tim reading to his son?

Actually, I like a little scene now and then of Tim and his (future) family. AU, but...I like that.

Reviewer: tigyr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2012 10:09 am Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo

I liked both versions...even though it was McAbby...:) 



Author's Response:

Nothing wrong with McAbby, Lori. At least, not in our fanfiction universe. :D

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Date: 08/14/2012 10:06 am Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo

Very cute version here Linda ^)^ 

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