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Reviewer: Smackalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2010 09:50 am Title: Perhaps Love

Ohhh, that was perfect. And yes, I can see why they would both choose to not tell the other, just for the reasons you lisetd. Lovely! :)

Author's Response: Thank you...have a Happy Thanksgiving ^_^

Reviewer: IMSLES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2010 02:59 am Title: Perhaps Love

Glad Tim was able to open up completely to her. She does have her ways!

~~Sue

Author's Response: Thank you Sue have a happy turkey day ^_^

Reviewer: Rosalinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2010 04:12 pm Title: Perhaps Love

*sigh* Wonderful.What a perfect way to end the week. Thank you for a lovely McGiva story, can't have enough of those.:-)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review I really appreciate it ^)^

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Date: 11/14/2010 09:27 am Title: Perhaps Love

Eeeee, yaaaaaay, they're going back to McGee's to be naughty. ^_^ LOL. That's what I love about McGee. He's so gentle with Ziva, even though he knows she's tougher than he is. LOL. It's perfect. Aw, yay. :)

Author's Response: lol...you're so naughty...I should really draw out what happens next ^_^

Reviewer: IMSLES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2010 10:05 pm Title: Perhaps Love

So sweet and tender, with the underlying strength and hunger!

~~Sue

Author's Response: Hunger? They just ate...lol...thanks Sue for reviews and rating ^_^

Reviewer: Smackalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 11:05 pm Title: Perhaps Love

I can't begin to say how happy it makes me to read about McGee being in love with Ziva. *happy sigh* But yes, she needs to let him know that she loves him, too, and things will be good. :)

Author's Response: Here comes the next chapter...with her response...thanks for reviewing I promise to try and do better at responding quicker ^_^

Reviewer: Smackalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 10:47 pm Title: Perhaps Love

Oh, this story makes me so happy. :D I meant to read this update the other night, but forgot about it, so I'm reading it (and chapter 4) tonight. :D

Author's Response: Thanks...sorry meant to respond sooner...HONESTLY I DID^_^ REally appreciate the review though thanks ^_^

Reviewer: Rosalinna Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2010 07:46 am Title: Perhaps Love

Sorry, had to review again as I gave a wrong rating.

No!You can't stop there...wonderful chapter and I hope you have the next chapter up soon.
Yes, it was nice to get more insight into their thoughts and feelings, especially Gibbs. Cleared things up :)
I really hope Ziva will open up to Tim like he has with her.

"You do remember Tony DiNozzo and Abby Sciuto right? The wonder twins of anything that can be snooped into?"
*snort*. That was a great line and so true.

Reviewer: Rosalinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 01:42 pm Title: Perhaps Love

My first review here yah. This is so sweet and it's McGiva,just what one needs after a long day.
One thing ,if that's okay, it would be nice to see more of what's going on inside their heads, perhaps more details overall. For instance it would have been nice to read more about Ziva's reaction and thoughts after her phonecall to Gibbs. Afterall it's some very un-Gibbs like behaviour. Just a thought... I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Will be interesting to see what happens after the kiss :-)

Author's Response:

Well, thank you for honoring me with your first review and yes the next chapter should provide more insight into all the characters reactions to date.

Thank you again for reviewing...^_^

Reviewer: IMSLES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 01:31 pm Title: Perhaps Love

Wanted to give you stars!!!!

Author's Response: Aww...thanks Sue ^_^

Reviewer: Smackalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2010 08:13 pm Title: Perhaps Love

Awwwwwwww. *swoon* Yes, this is precious. And very believable. I like that they're taking it slow and it's not this out and out admission of love or anything. Makes it quite realistic. Yay! 

Author's Response:

Thank you Sherry, I'm glad that you like it.  Hope you had a Happy Birthday ^_^

Reviewer: IMSLES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2010 08:08 am Title: Perhaps Love

Only time will tell where it leads them to!!!

~~Sue

Author's Response:

Yup, that is true...hmmm

and love for some is like a cloud for some as strong as steel...have to figure out that one...lol

Thank you Sue as always Hugs you^_^

Reviewer: akaeve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 11:26 am Title: Perhaps Love

ah that is so sweet , and warm and cuddly.

Author's Response:

Thanks Pat ^_^

Reviewer: Smackalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 04:25 am Title: Perhaps Love

Ohhhh, this is so good so far. *happy sigh* I've actually been writing something kinda like this, though not really, for a couple of challenges. So hopefully people don't think I'm copying you. LOL. 

Author's Response:

Or vice versa...lol...thank you so much for reading and reviewing ^_^

Reviewer: IMSLES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 02:32 am Title: Perhaps Love

One my old favorites.

Can't wait to find out what Ziva learns about Tim and her feelings for him.

~~Sue

Author's Response:

Me neither...guess that means I need to finish writing it huh?...Thanks Sue

 ^_^

Reviewer: iluvmesomeMcHottie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 01:38 am Title: Perhaps Love

This is so cute Lori! McGiva flangst! =D
(Swell, somewhat angst...due to Ziva's nightmares)
But I love it! =D

Author's Response: Thank you, not going to have much more angst...planned anyway...lol ^_^

Reviewer: IMSLES Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 07:37 pm Title: Hold on to the Nights

AW, Timmy gets some nice comfort from a 'friend'!

Cute.

Author's Response:

Thank you Sue...^_^

Reviewer: ginnyl1982 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 07:02 pm Title: Hold on to the Nights

Very nicwe story, I never liked Dog Tags and how Tim was treated. I like your story much better!

Author's Response: Thank You...I wasn't impressed with the way Abby treated Tim either...as you can tell ^_^  Thanks not just for reading but the review as well ^_^

Reviewer: LadyTwyla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 08:26 am Title: Hold on to the Nights

You not only captured the essence of the song but the beginnings of a wonderful relationship...excellent story.

I really liked how Tim woke up and found Ziva...hoping he was not dreaming.  Then how she explains to him what Ari said to show him he needs to be there with her, for both of them.

So nicely done....kudos...



Author's Response: Thanks Marysia, and thanks for the other heads up as well ^_^

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 02:32 am Title: Hold on to the Nights

I love it.

so great to finally have Gibbs see the truth that was going on right under his nose in that one.

and giving them the space to work around rule 12 - awesome

although, I have to say, I would never have considered Ari to be protecting Tim with that near-miss that wouldn't have been if Tim hadn't moved -when the 1st guy shot at him.

but, I still love it!



Author's Response:

although, I have to say, I would never have considered Ari to be protecting Tim with that near-miss that wouldn't have been if Tim hadn't moved -when the 1st guy shot at him.

Well, my thought on that revolved around first Tony then Gibbs stating that Ari had done Tim a favor by killing the other shooter. Ari really and truly didn't need to save Tim that day and I was wondering why he would have...just another twist in my mind...lol 

thanks Donna for reading/reviewing/rating...(being patient with rest of the Knights)

Reviewer: Cat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2010 03:30 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Awww

Author's Response:

thanks :)

 

Reviewer: LadyTwyla Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2010 08:50 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

I remember the song...and think if  Tim did too, he'd be thinking of Ziva...

I wonder if it's translatable into Hebrew????

I liked your "quickie"...  ;>)

 



Author's Response: Thanks, I was a kid when the song came out but it seemed to fit in this case.

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