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Reviewer: qntm_lp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 6

You tell a good story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Memory Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 07:50 am Title: Prologue

liked it a lot. i like the way Gibbs stand for Tim. i would like an other story in this serie maybe one where Tim is finally feeling free and back into track

Author's Response: I'm not sure I have another story on this series in me...but I've learned it never pays to say never...I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: Precious Pup Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

Very very nice. Great end. The handshake from one stranger more powerful than everything else really to help him heal. Good work

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really wanted a positive note on which to end the series, and a gesture of kindness from a stranger just seemed the best way to go.

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

awesome job!

words don't do it justice.

but it was great for Gibbs, Vance and Fornell to go public - the best way to make sure it didn't keep happening to Tim - the way they did.

so glad it was a positive direction in the end.



Author's Response: Many thanks! I decided that there had to be a pretty dramatic change in the way the team had dealt (or not dealt) with Tim's situation, and the Tv show was the best option I could come up with...I'm so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for sticking with me throughout this series.

Reviewer: LadyTwyla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 01:39 pm Title: Prologue

Wow!  Outstanding.  Tim had to be shown he wasn't alone and that he wasn't going to face the future alone.  No better way to do that...Team McGee.  And the Director, Gibbs and Fornell, all publically there for him, and his teammates beside him.

 Great ending, Mad.  It really feels right!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It feels like it's been a long journey for me as well as Tim, although in a way I'm sorry to see it end...but I feel it's the right time, and Tim is in safe hands!!

Reviewer: ginnyl1982 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2010 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 5

Go Black Lung!!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I really enjoyed giving Jimmy a moment in the spotlight!

Reviewer: Memory Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2010 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

i hope they can help tim and then Tim will allow them to help!

Author's Response: Tim understands that he can't get through this alone any longer, let's just hope the others can give him what he needs...thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2010 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'll bet Tim will feel somewhat lighter in spirit now that he's  allowed the others to get a glimpse of exactly what he'd been holding inside - suffering in silence.

 it'll be interesting to see what they can do to thelp him.



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving a comment! Hopefully, Tim will feel a little better now, and the others have plans...

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2010 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

wow

that was a long time comin' wasn't it?

I'm looking forward to hearing what Tim has to say to the team.



Author's Response: Yep...it's been building up for a while. He needs to let the others know exactly what the last months have meant to him.

Reviewer: Memory Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2010 05:41 pm Title: Prologue

wow i love it. i wish McGee will be ok

Author's Response: Many thanks!! McGee has a little way to go, but at least he is getting some help now...

Reviewer: LadyTwyla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2010 02:27 pm Title: Prologue

But Tim can't do it alone, no matter what kind of help it is.  They all have to be there for him...

 

This nightmare is soooo painful for the entire team, not just Tim.

 

Here's hoping they all pull together and help him find a way out of his torment.... 

 

Excellent story....waiting and wanting more.... 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Tim finally comes to see that he can't get through this alone, and the team get an idea of how much he has been hiding from them in the next chapter...

Reviewer: Precious Pup Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2010 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Arrrkk TIM! At least this might get him some help, some councilling before it turns into something that could have perminant damage to his body. Extra guilt all round though as everyone who thought he was doing ok realises that in fact hes just been hiding it better. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! This collapse is certainly going to trigger lots of guilt...but in a strange way it could also be the best thing that could happen, Tim needs help, and he needs it fast!

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2010 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

wow.

so sad that it's affecting his reputation as an author, too.

and as much as it's sad that he took himself to the point of collapse. at least it was sooner rather than later.

and thank goodness, Ziva was once again on the ball.

sure hope he hasn't done irreparable damage to his body.



Author's Response: This situation (none of it of Tim's making) is impinging on every aspect of his life...Hopefully the team has found out in time... Many thanks for your continuing support!

Reviewer: LadyTwyla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2010 02:20 pm Title: Prologue

Good thing Ducky's on alert...

Now the rest of the team have to be...and stand by him like Ziva.

But just what was the message that triggered this????

(sigh) you've got me wondering and worried now... 



Author's Response: Yep...Tim's going to need Ducky!! And you are absolutely right, Tim needs all of them now...the message, I'll get to that in the next chapter! Thank you so much for the review!!

Reviewer: Memory Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh oh, i can smell trouble

Author's Response: I think you could be right...and thank you for leaving a comment!

Reviewer: tigyr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm hoping that they recognize him as an author not a pervert...he's been through enough

Author's Response: He's been through a lot...but not quite enough, not yet...many thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: Precious Pup Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh NO! I hope they recognise him for being Gemcity and not as internet perv. Great series Snaps.

Author's Response: Thanks so much 'Precious'!! It's not so much who they think he is, as the fact that they've recognised him at all that worries Tim...and it may cause him to take renewed action regarding his weight!

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor guy.

he doesn't know how strong he really is

but he wouldn't have survived through all that without that inner strength, that's for sure.

looking forward to seeing the next chapter and how Ziva and Tim will work at rebuilding their relationship - hope they can.

wonder what Gibbs was doing while Tim was doing all this struglling 



Author's Response: He is strong, very strong, but even strong people have their limits, and maybe Tim is getting close to his, we shall see... Gibbs as usual was focussing on the work, and trying to keep his team together without Ziva, and yes, he’s taken his eye off the ball...again.

Reviewer: tigyr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2010 08:20 pm Title: Prologue

OH...BOY...Great start...not liking where it seems headed though...Time for some Ziva intervention...yes?

Author's Response: Time for intervention certainly…but Tim’s keeping things close to his chest, so how long will it be before the others know that he needs help… Thanks so much for you comment!

Reviewer: Precious Pup Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2010 05:12 pm Title: Prologue

Ohhhh you have cleverly managed to work Tims weight lose into your own series! Nice one. Makes total sense to me. I would be worried too.

Author's Response: Thank you!! And welcome back! The weight loss thing actually came to me after a comment by a reviewer on the main forum, so it wasn’t entirely my idea; I just hope I can get the story I have in my head down on paper!

Reviewer: LadyTwyla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2010 01:37 pm Title: Prologue

Why do I have the feeling this is not going to be the easy fix Tim hopes it will be???

I know this will be just as great as the previous stories in this series...

 Looking forward to this.... 



Author's Response: Would I make things easy for our Tim? You know me too well! I hope very much that you continue to enjoy this!!

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2010 01:16 pm Title: Prologue

ooh!

 another addition to this great saga!

can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope you enjoy the conclusion to the saga....

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