Date: 01/21/2011 05:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! You did a good job showing how things developed among all three men, and I loved protective Tony and confused McGee. (Not to mention worried McMutt!) It's been a while since I read Journals, and I'm not sure I saw the ending of it. So I was a little bit confused about who was together before the story and who wasn't and who knew what about those elements. I felt like that shifted partway through, but it was probably just me not having read the surrounding story. All in all, a great story that was a nice warm, fuzzy in a crazy week.
Author's Response: thank you very much Jen...appreciate you stopping by to read. ^)^
Date: 01/20/2011 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1
ah, my Christmas Present!
You know I absolutely loved it
Happy to see you've posted it here for everyone else to enjoy as well!
You two did an awesome job!
again, thank you so much!
Author's Response: You are so welcome Donna ^_^
Date: 01/20/2011 12:37 am Title: Chapter 10
Well Im thinking that Tony is going to want his piece of sweet Tim when he wakes up. :) Maybe he can continue to reinforce how attractive he finds Tim physically as there are deep insecurities there and Tonys comment over the years wouldn't have helped.
On a relationship angle though I think there needs to be some work. Tim seems close to 'past Gibbs' from the fair but the current Gibbs didn't even understand Tim well enough to tell him where he lived and that he could come over anytime he really needed to talk. But then again Tony in this regard is closer to Tim, when Gibbs left Tim was Tonys Senior and they have been there for each other so perhaps Tony can help them sort out a new balance?
Author's Response: Thanks Amber, ^_^
Date: 01/19/2011 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
love it! :-) I really enjoy the 3boys together, you bring out a side of Gibbs and Tony that I think are there but not seen. Anxiously awaiting and hoping for more! thanks :-)
Author's Response: will have more being posted tonight ^_^
Date: 01/19/2011 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wonderful! Im glad to see this scenario continued. Each of them provides something different to the other. I will have to go back and re read the first story again as it has been a while.MORE!
Author's Response: It's on the way Amber^_^ As I told Carolyn I have to figure out the chapter breaks due to how we wrote it for Donna...should be able to post most of it tonight though ^)^