Date: 11/24/2012 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Lessons
please can we have the next chapters.Who the immortal in lift are they here to kill or help tim. it been a good story to read.
Working on it, and the Immortal in the elevator is friendly (well, relatively ;) )
Date: 05/21/2011 11:42 am Title: Chapter 4 - Strange Revelations
Great story,please update soon.I hope someone will teach Tim,to use a sword,and that McLeod will come and visit.
Author's Response: Tim will be getting lessons in the next chapter. MacLeod probably won't be around much in the beginning, but he may put in an appearance later.
Date: 05/11/2011 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1 – Unfortunate Ending
I love it. I especially like the fact that Gibbs knows exactly what's happening to Tim and is trying his best to look out for him.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Gibbs is a little shaken here, too, since he never thought he'd have to deal with a team member in this situation. There's also a good reason why Gibbs isn't "Watcher" material (although it does give a whole new meaning to rule #35 ;D )
Date: 05/10/2011 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Strange Revelations
This story is great, I love, I have been following in fanfiction, and I love, I hope you can give us a new chapter soon as I read the 4 chapters twice already ... greetings.
Author's Response: I will try to get a new chapter going as soon as I can. Unfortunately this story takes more time to write than any of the others. I'm glad you like it, though ;D