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Reviewer: Gossamer Moonglow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2011 09:36 am Title: Giant Leap

The gaps in story telling confused me a bit but this was great. Only you could make a Tim/Abby story a case story!! And I really liked it. As for me not liking the pairing, that's not true. I sometimes may not like Abby but I like them together (it's Tim/Ziva that I can't really work my mind around despite my efforts). Really wonderful!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry there were gaps here Anastasia, I will be sure to fill in all the holes in my next story! I hope it didn't spoil your enjoyment too much, and thank you for reading and commenting on this, you're part of a pretty exclusive group! LOL!!

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Date: 07/13/2011 02:04 am Title: Giant Leap

I looove this! It's the Abby that deserves Tim. And the poem at the end is perfect for this. Really inspired work here. Sheila

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sheila, I have to write Abby that way, or I can't see them together, I'm glad you liked it, and I love the poem too, it just seemed to work for the two of them at this stage of their relationship!

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Date: 07/12/2011 02:57 am Title: Slow Progress

Ha Jarvis AND Gallagher! Not to mention Glastonbury! I had a quick timetravel back in 90s brit-pop. Really liked Tony in this. SO him! Gibbs being the investigator that he is noticed the subtle changes! Very nice.

Author's Response: I wondered if anyone would notice the BritPop references! I'm glad you're enjoying the characters!

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Date: 07/12/2011 02:36 am Title: Small Steps

Personally, if they ever get together I want to be instigated by Abby, but it's been a long time since I read anything that was so close to the reality of the series! Even though I have no clue about what has happened with Abby... spoilers I guess.

Nice team bantering and a worrysome murder.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a comment, I know McAbby is not your thing! I hope you like the way the story ends...

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