Date: 05/30/2012 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 12
Read this whole story in one go and it is just excellent. Your plot was so well detailed and made such sense, I really enjoyed the build up to tim's kidnapping. Terrible subject matter until Tim was rescued, and really difficult to read, but probably a lot more realistic than we usually get in fiction.
It is truly difficult to write believably about crazy people, and yes, I know, not exactly politically correct, but Landon was bonkers, no other way to say it. You did a terrific job portraying his internal dialogue and how his warped little brain worked. I did feel sorry for his sister, but I also wanted to smack her for being so damn oblivious. Same holds true for Melissa. Geez, more money than sense, and what a waste when there are so many other deserving people who could have really used that money for much better purposes.
Geez, Mawler provided the break in the case that led them to saving McGee??? Did not see that one coming.
This was a terrific story, from beginning to end, and although the torture may well give me nightmares, it was worth it for the wonderful read.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: I really donít know how to begin thanking you for this wonderful review! This story is supposed to have been viewed over 1,000 times and not a single person had offered any kind of opinion...I was seriously thinking that it must be one of the worst stories Iíve ever written! Then you write so many kind words about Resolution, and all of a sudden I feel 100% better; I worked so hard to make what I hoped was an interesting story and your comments mean more than I could possibly say, THANK YOU!! I hope you didnít get nightmares, you certainly donít deserve them, thanks again...I feel ready to write something new now!