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Reviewer: gee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2013 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

Great story, really enjoyed the depth you brought to McGee throughout it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I like McGee as a character so I'm really pleased you liked how I wrote him.

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2013 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Tim - here he is doing such a good job of staying in character undercover

wonder what went wrong.

thoroughly enjoying this - as I do al of your wonderful stories.

looking foward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: Hes doing his very best, and so far so good...you know things dont end well, but were a little way from finding out how Tim got in the state he was in at the start of the story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing at this busy holiday time! Im hoping to get the remaining chapters done at a much better rate than the last two.

Reviewer: Precious Pup Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2012 05:41 am Title: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this story. Sorry to hear you hurt your finger and I hope its healing up ok?

Author's Response: Thnak you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm going to let Tim have a bit more time enjoying himself before....well, that would be telling. Finger's all better now thanks!

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2012 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Tim.

Good to see Gibbs by his side even when he's not aware of it yet.

looking forward to finding out what hppaned to him, though. - and hoping he finds his way back out of that mental hell he's stuck in.

great story- as always.



Author's Response: Thank you! It's so good of you to read and comment, I've been very lax in reviewing these days, I must do better! Tim's in a bad place, as ever in my stories, but I promise you'll find out what happened to him.

Reviewer: Gotta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2012 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to put my 2 cents in over here too. Can't wait for the next chapter on this one!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it is wonderfully kind of you to comment here AND on ffnet!

Reviewer: Ms Bagels Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2012 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting beginning. So what exactly happened to Tim and what is Gibbs going to do about it?

Author's Response: All will be revealed as the story progresses. I hope you find time to read more, and thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter!

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