Date: 11/21/2013 06:32 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow. What an end! I can't even express the level of hotness this chapter has, it's so hot. Wow. Wow. But the punch me right in the gut. I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Happy that the team is settling in well. Will beg and grovel for more!
Love and cherries,
Thanks, this was a fun one to write. Book 3 on the way and it's even more fun.
Date: 11/21/2013 12:05 am Title: Chapter 4
So beautifully HOT! Emerald, you are the mistress of smut (a very rarely awarded literary award, didn't you know?).
Will we see any more in this universe?
Thank you so much. Number 3 is being written, then book 4 will wrap things up and deal with Ziva's leaving.
Date: 10/31/2013 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
SO. DAMN. HOT. Each chapter of both stories. You melted the neural synapses in my brain so coherent speech is currently unavailable. So please accept my bowing in awe and admiration, instead.
Thank you. Emerald runs off to get a bucket to gather Stars into as she reads the last chapter. *g*
Date: 05/10/2013 06:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Tim’s commentary was sooo sexy; I am not in the slightest bit surprised that Abby was able to come just to the sound of his voice!
Totally yummy chapter, apart from the stunningly sensual sex, I also loved the fact that Tony is so taken aback by Tim’s experience in the loving arts...and the ‘other head’ slap, a classic Emerald line, brilliant!
Thanks. I always love rattling Tony a bit.
Date: 05/06/2013 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG! This had me so very hot! And Ziva got her dream position. Wonder what they will do with Abby. Oh the Feast!!!! Wowsers! If only this would happen in real life where I was Ziva. ***Dreaming***
Thanks. All up now.
Date: 05/05/2013 11:37 am Title: Chapter 2
yea, an update!!! Great chapter. how come it's Tony that keeps ending up fucking Ziva? Can't wait to see what happens when Abby pays a visit.
Remember, he's the most vanilla of the group, so he tends to stick with what's familiar. Besides, that was Ziva's fantasy, remember?
Date: 05/05/2013 06:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my...HOT doesn’t even come close!
I don’t like chocolate, but if it was served the way it was in this chapter I think I could be tempted to enjoy a taste or two!!! A truly stupendous, indeed orgasmic feast, I’m so looking forward to Abby joining the fun!
Thanks, I can't think of a better way to eat chocolate, myself. I'm having fun with this romp.
Date: 05/04/2013 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow that was hot! Scorching hot! Tony should really learn some patience though. LOL. Hot!! I think I'm going to go put on some clean panties... Hot!
Love and cherries,
Damn, you're fast. You managed to get a review up before I could get the page to reload. Glad you liked it.