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Reviewer: Crossx29 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2014 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting story so far. Good writing. Needs an update!

Reviewer: hellishlykeeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2014 03:36 am Title: Chapter 3

Trully disturbing,
I hope this is roleplay and the girls just agreed secretly to play some BSDM game ... if not it is really time to get them saved and make sure Ali wont get away with that.
Update soon

Reviewer: Callen37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2014 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Read it....this is a departure from your normal stuff but good writing nonetheless I hope that they get rescued soon.

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