Date: 11/15/2014 09:23 pm Title: A Killing Frost
Oh great build up to that one moment we all want to know about. Loved the split of what was happening with each group during the same minutes. Yay Tim way to go, he has so much more inner strength than people give him credit for. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree with you about Tim, if only we could see a little more of this side of him on the show...I'm glad the chapter worked for you, I'm always worried my 'action' bits don't work very well.
Date: 11/12/2014 12:04 pm Title: Freezing Point
Great chapter. Love the flow of it, you are lead to read at the speed Gibbs drives lol. Love that Tim knows he only has energy to get it right once and is convinced he will get that one moment he needs. Would live too see him save himself after all the insults over him being weak. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: What a terrific review, thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, I hope you like the next chapter, should be ready in a day or so. Thanks again, hearing from you has been a real tonic!