Date: 02/22/2015 10:10 am Title: Chapter 3
Brilliant chapter, nice and long with loads of meaty pieces, loved it.
The rest of the team not around to help. Do I sense a change in Gibbs and Tim's relationship happening....?
the only change in their relationshhip possible here might be one of more strength and closeness -bordering more on father/son than before.
We might hear from the team before too much longer. We'll have to wait and see. But even if we do, it'll probably be from a distance since they're all out of town.
thank you again for reading/reviweing/
Date: 01/16/2015 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was such a lovely picture you painted of a summers afternoon and love shyanne's character, she is so cute.
You certainly know how to ruin a nice day lol.
Great start, looking forward to reading more.
sorry for the delay in responding - but your review is most appreciated!