Date: 02/22/2015 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
"So far back in the closet you're in Narnia?"
reread this for purposes of judging the challenge, and this line still cracks me up!
I am also father fond of Tony thinking Jimmy's glare has been learned from Ducky ;)
That line seems to be popular ;)
Date: 02/15/2015 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
This is an adorable story. I know you said 'never again', but if you should ever decide to 'ever again,' I'll happily read it. Good flow, good mush (for someone who doesn't do mush, it's really good), and cute characters. And, yes, I do like the Narnia line.
Thanks! That line seems to be pretty popular :)