Date: 02/22/2015 04:23 pm Title: Why Not?
I'm not fully in the Tony/Zoe camp yet (and who know what the show will make of it), but I love what you've done here. "Why not" DiNozzo. What'll be do now? I enjoyed how you took us through the past, and especially how you touched on Tony/Ziva. I too think it would have been a mistake if he stayed with her if she asked, and I have no doubt that he probably would. Why not? There really is a difference between "keeping your options open" and "making informed decisions." I think we all learn that, eventually.
Great little story, Madeline. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I'm not sure about the Zoe situation either, I've only seen her in Parental Guidance...we're still weeks behind over here, but I did think she represents the possibility of a new beginning for Tony. He's a great character to write for because he doesn't always act the way a grown-up very special agent should, and he's all the more loveable because he's not perfect, he's TONY! Thank you so much for taking time to leave everyone who entered the challenge a lovely comment! x
Date: 02/15/2015 09:12 pm Title: Why Not?
Nice summary of Tonys development! U should add an epilogue of his inner most thoughts from the most recent episode "Caydence"! As always, love your writing (even if there was no Tim..Lol).
Author's Response: Thank you very much! An epilogue might be a good idea, unfortunately we've only just had 'Parental Guidance Suggested' over here so I've got a few weeks to go before I get to see Cadence. Sorry there was no Tim, can't seem to get any Tim ideas at the moment, thanks again. x