Date: 03/08/2015 08:47 am Title: Found
The Outsiders was one of my favorite books as a young teen, very interesting premise to bring these characters into a NCIS story. It is a great start but surely you will continue on to the story otherwise it's just a beginning and reads very unfinished. I encourage you to move forward with this.
Author's Response: I am not sure if there will be more for this particular writing exercise or not. It fit with a writing prompt that I had, and was complete for what I had challenged myself to do. I'd like to explore this particular concept further, but so far the Muse has not really been there for this.
Date: 03/08/2015 06:27 am Title: Found
I find it curious that you have marked this as complete, as it only feels like half a story. There is no explanation as to who 'Steve' and 'Sodapop' are, apart from the fact that 'Steve' is a marine. Neither do we know who Tim Shepard ('Dally'?) or 'Curly' (Johnny?) are. What kind of gang were they in? And, more to the point, was Curly's murderer caught?
It's an interesting idea for a plot and is well written, but more chapters would make it a much better story.
Author's Response: It's a crossover, those are characters from the book, The Outsiders. I have no idea if I will write more for this particular story or not.
Date: 03/08/2015 05:58 am Title: Found
This was interesting..It'd be great if you continued
Author's Response: If I could continue this, I would. I really enjoyed writing this -- it was for a prompt, and was a writing exercise. I keep hoping for more inspiration to continue it, and it hasn't come. Perhaps, after posting this here, I will be able to add more. Thank you.