Date: 01/29/2016 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like your story usually. And this one is still one I like. It's a little bit dark and almost hopeless.
It is a little dark, but I would say that it's not hopeless. It's more of the immediate aftermath of a bad event and Tim hasn't had the chance to work through it yet. In the moment, it's terrible, but given time, things will get better.
Thanks for reading!