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Reviewer: akaeve Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2017 09:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Thank you PR for your lovely review and yes the "blowup doll" was a masterpiece I thought.

Reviewer: PhoenixRising Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2017 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for participating in my challenge.

 

I loved your story! The thought of Tony entering a dance contest made me laugh and I could see him doing it. The blow-up doll scene was hysterical and Gibbs' one-liner of twinkle toes made me laugh so hard. I could picture Gibbs saying that on the show.

 

And I loved how at the end you had the whole team, even Gibbs, supporting Tony in his endeavor. That made me smile. I love it when you write funny stuff. Thank you again.

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