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Reviewer: Enthusiastic Fish Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2018 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

In a more serious way, this reminds of a story I read a while back of Gibbs experimenting with using emoticons...and doing very poorly.

Interesting little mystery without the angst that might have been part of it in other situations. Nice!

Reviewer: akaeve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2017 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I so loved this it was filled full of emotion and thought and kindness. Sometimes writing about through RL makes us better writers. Loved it sweetie.

Reviewer: Smartkid37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2017 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!

Reviewer: iheartGibbs Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2017 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Bittersweet and original. Loved it!

Reviewer: PhoenixRising Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2017 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now-a-days, you can't say many stories are truly original. There's usually something that is almost cliche in each of them.

 

Not this one. This is definitely one of the more unique and interesting stories I've read. Since you based this on a true story, it just proves the maxim that the truth is stranger than fiction. You really captured the confusion of everyone not understanding what was going on and I loved the happy ending. Lovely story.

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