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Sting Ray  ||  Reviews - 4  ||  starstarstarstarstar Table of Contents
Author: KGibbs
Rating: FR15
Summary: “Leroy Jethro Gibbs, you are under arrest for the murder of NCIS Special Agent Anthony DiNozzo.”

Categories: General
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Jenny Shepard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Original Character(s), Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 9
Genre: Angst, Case Fic, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 11383 Read Count: 4236
[Report This] Published: 01/28/2008 Updated: 01/28/2008
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

“Ziva, didn’t anyone ever tell you English was the hardest language to learn?”

“I thought they were lying.” 

I don't know what it was, but that really made me giggle.

May take me a while to finish, but this is definitely on my tbr list :D

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Morals

“Right now, you’re all confused and disoriented. And the bad news is, things are only going to get worse.” - Anderson Cooper

Perfect quote is perfect...

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Messenger

Oh I did NOT see that coming. I was trying to figure it out, because Gibbs having actually murdered Tony and the reader knowing that seemed too simple (whilst also being super complicated), but you genuinely had me surprised here.

what was that I said about not reading it all tonight?? <_<

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Manifest

Oh man, that ending cracked me up. I was already chuckled, and then Abby's faux pas... Really, really good job!

Author: KGibbs
Rating: FR15
Summary: Ducky POV during the confrontation between Ari and Gibbs at the end of Bete Noire.

Categories: General
Characters: Ari Haswari, Caitlin "Kate" Todd, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Chapters: 1
Genre: Angst, Episode Tag
Warnings: None
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 900 Read Count: 474
[Report This] Published: 01/29/2008 Updated: 01/29/2008
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/20/2014 Title: Chapter 1: My Hands Are Tied

Tense! I like this a lot. Never really occurred to me to wonder whether the others could hear what was going on, but it's a very interesting thought :D

Author: Taylorgibbs
Rating: FR13
Summary: Abby gets a special delivery.

Categories: Het > Gibbs/Kate, Het > DiNozzo/Abby
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Caitlin "Kate" Todd, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Chapters: 1
Genre: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 1164 Read Count: 1154
[Report This] Published: 01/14/2009 Updated: 01/14/2009
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 07/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jethro leaned in, motioning the eight year old twins closer. “Alan, Arianna, your aunt Kate exaggerates too much. Since I married her, I became a teddy bear.” As soon as they were close enough to be sufficiently scared, he growled.

Bwahahahaha that is so adorable. I can totally imagine that.

Dear Abby  ||  Reviews - 3  ||   Table of Contents
Author: Caos Accidentale
Rating: FR7
Summary: Postcards from Tony to Abby and vice versa while he's the NCIS Agent Afloat. Just a bit of Tabbyish Fluff.

Categories: General > Humor
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo
Chapters: 4
Genre: Fluff, Friendship, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 3397 Read Count: 1453
[Report This] Published: 05/18/2009 Updated: 05/18/2009
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 07/15/2015 Title: Chapter 3: Postcards from the Edge

This is so adorable and the back of DiNozzo's head punching bag made me laugh aloud <3

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 07/15/2015 Title: Chapter 4: Son of a Postcard

This made me smile so many times <3 totally adorable and believable <3

Backfired  ||  Reviews - 369  ||  starstarstarstarstar Table of Contents
Past Featured StoryAuthor: Emerald
Rating: FR18
Summary: When two agents wake up in bed together with no memory of how they got there, it starts them on a path to where they never thought they'd go.

Categories: Slash / Femslash, Slash / Femslash > Gibbs/McGee
Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee
Chapters: 48
Genre: Case Fic, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Non-Con, Sex, Violence
Challenges: Finish That WIP Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 95725 Read Count: 164308
[Report This] Published: 08/06/2009 Updated: 09/05/2011
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 01/02/2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't usually read McGibbs, but was recommended you as a writer who writes McGibbs without it getting horribly out of character. Don't know if I'll ever really ship them, but this is a lot further than I usually make it through McGibbs stories ;)

What I wanted to say, though, was that I really loved that scene between Vance and Fornell. It felt true to them both, they're both trying to protect a friend, and I loved Fornell saying, I'm not going to forced anything, but I will come with, no argument, cause I have to let him know I have his back. I love both the Gibbs/Fornell old married couple friendship, and the Vance/Gibbs friendship that grew so believably from mutual distrust to real friendship and Vance being part of the team family, so I loooooved seeing the final link of the triangle as Vance and Fornell bond over the man they both love and respect and value. I haz teh warm fuzzies :)

Author: GibbsLover
Rating: FR13
Summary: Kate did not die on the roof top. How did she survive? She is afraid to say. Her secret may not be safe for long though.

Categories: General > Angst, General > Drama, Het > Gibbs/Kate, General > Sci-Fi/Supernatural/Fantasy
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Caitlin "Kate" Todd, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Jenny Shepard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee
Chapters: 20
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Language, Violence
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 41546 Read Count: 6131
[Report This] Published: 05/11/2010 Updated: 07/17/2010
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 07/19/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Being dead would be a pretty good excuse for not coming to work *nods*

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 07/19/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hahaha love that you turned the age thing on its head!

Author: GibbsLover
Rating: FR7
Summary: /The Royal Wedding in Sweden today on June 19th, 2010 inspired this./ Kate made a deal several years ago and now her time is almost up. Maybe Gibbs can help her out? KIBBS and a little Tony.

Categories: General, Het > Gibbs/Kate
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Caitlin "Kate" Todd, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Chapters: 1
Genre: Alternate Universe, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 2157 Read Count: 866
[Report This] Published: 06/19/2010 Updated: 06/19/2010
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 05/04/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Can you imagine? A president was guarded by a princess? That is a movie plot right there."

Ain't that the truth! Someone should write that.

This made me smile - sweet!

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 07/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tony nodded as he turned to Gibbs. "Can you imagine? A president was guarded by a princess? That is a movie plot right there."

He has a point ;) :)

Author: tigyr
Rating: FR7
Summary: My response..corrected...to Channel D's Be Very, Very Quiet Challenge. Apologizes for the confusion ^_^

Categories: General
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Any NCIS Character(s), Bert the Hippo, Cynthia Sumner, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Jenny Shepard, Jimmy Palmer, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 1
Genre: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Be Very, Very Quiet Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 2919 Read Count: 885
[Report This] Published: 07/11/2010 Updated: 07/11/2010
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/14/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwww! This was really heartfelt. Nice job!



Author's Response:

thanks, it was a few years ago, but I did think of updating it someday since we have a new cast of characters from what I've seen so far. ^)^

 

Airplanes  ||  Reviews - 1  ||   Table of Contents
Author: Chedders
Rating: FR13
Summary: Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars? I could really use a wish right now. A series of Kate/Gibbs moments.

Categories: Het > Gibbs/Kate
Characters: Caitlin "Kate" Todd, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Chapters: 4
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Episode Tag, Fluff, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, UST
Warnings: Spoilers
Series: Kibbsapalooza
Completed: No Word count: 1461 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 07/17/2010 Updated: 07/18/2010
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 05/10/2015 Title: Chapter 2: That Airplanes In The Night Sky

Awwwwwww <3

Game Night  ||  Reviews - 8  ||  starstarstarstarstar Table of Contents
Past Featured StoryAuthor: colorguard28
Rating: FR21
Summary: The other Gibblets are so glad Otto didn't kill Abby, they head to Tony's to hang out and play some board games. They didn't realize that McGee, beer and a Twister board were a red-light situation waiting to happen. McAbby, McNozzo, McGiva, Tabby, Tiva, Abby/Jimmy, McGee/Jimmy, Tony/Jimmy, Ziva/Jimmy, McGee/Ziva/Tony, Abby/Ziva/Tony, Jimmy/Abby/Tony

Categories: Threesome / Moresome, Het > DiNozzo/Abby, Het > DiNozzo/Ziva, Slash / Femslash > DiNozzo/McGee, Slash / Femslash > Other Slash Pairing, Het > McGee/Abby, Het > McGee/Ziva, Het > Other Het Pairing
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Jimmy Palmer, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 1
Genre: Crack!Fic, Episode Tag, Humor
Warnings: Kink, Sex, Threesome/Moresome
Challenges: Clue Challenge, Subtext Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 4426 Read Count: 4824
[Report This] Published: 07/07/2011 Updated: 07/07/2011
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 05/22/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"That's what I told him last time."

I laughed so. damn. hard. OMG bwahahahahahahahahahahah 



Author's Response: :) Complete crack.

Past Featured StoryAuthor: DNAchemLia
Rating: FR15
Summary: A revenge plot leaves one of the MCRT with just 24 hours left to live. Written for the If Today Was Your Last Day Challenge. Post Season 8.

Categories: General > Drama, General > Sci-Fi/Supernatural/Fantasy, General > Suspense
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Jimmy Palmer, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Original Character(s), Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 5
Genre: Angst, Friendship
Warnings: Disturbing Imagery
Challenges: It's the End of the World As We Know It Challenge, If Today Was Your Last Day Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 13333 Read Count: 5353
[Report This] Published: 07/17/2011 Updated: 09/26/2011
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/22/2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think "enjoy" would be a bit if a weird word to use about this story, but I thought it was very well done. Glad Kendall got his comeuppance. My favourite moment was the McNozzo g'bye and Tony saying to say hi to Kate... Awwwww. 

Good job, Lia! *applause*



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)  I liked the McNozzo moment, too :D

Author: musicnotes093
Rating: FR7
Summary: I don’t do good summeries just read it. Tiva

Categories: Het > DiNozzo/Abby, General > Angst, Het > DiNozzo/Ziva, General > Drama
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Any NCIS Character(s), Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 2
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Other (See Author Notes)
Challenges: Worst Fic Ever! Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 998 Read Count: 1228
[Report This] Published: 08/17/2011 Updated: 11/18/2011
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/22/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was physically painful to read, it must've been torture to write. LOL.

I love your 'summery' oh my goodness I've SEEN that on ff.net, that's the scary thing :-o LOL

Author: thecookiemomma
Rating: FR13
Summary: Tony and also Ziva are in love and Tony saves Ziva from a very scarey fate.

Categories: Het > DiNozzo/Ziva
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Original Character(s), Ziva David
Chapters: 1
Genre: Crack!Fic
Warnings: None
Challenges: Worst Fic Ever! Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 829 Read Count: 693
[Report This] Published: 09/11/2011 Updated: 09/11/2011
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/22/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The scary thing is, this isn't actually the worst Tiva fic I've ever read *yikes*

I am at mun's over the weekend and she's at the other end of the settee, she asked what I was doing that was making me laugh so much!

This was so awful in a hilariously brilliant way *applause*



Author's Response: hahaha. Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :D

Good Dog  ||  Reviews - 2  ||  starstarstarstarstar Table of Contents
Past Featured StoryAuthor: Calliatra
Rating: FR13
Summary: Sometimes you can’t control the outcome. Sometimes you have to look at the reality in front of you and accept it. Tag/Fix-It for 5x13 “Dog Tags.” Written for the Fix It Challenge, the Episode Tag Challenge and the Family Challenge.

Categories: General
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Jethro the dog
Chapters: 1
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Episode Tag
Warnings: None
Challenges: Family Challenge, Fix it! Challenge, Episode Tag Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 2477 Read Count: 1443
[Report This] Published: 01/14/2012 Updated: 01/14/2012
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 03/26/2016 Title: Chapter 1: Good Dog

I liked this! So many stories and fixits surrounding this episode seem to be based off the premise that Abby is just being a childish bitch, it's really refreshing to see one that tries to look at the episode from the POV of "we know who Abby is, so let's figure out why she might act in such and such a way". Just... refreshing.

Nice job.

Author: BlackSwan
Rating: FR15
Summary:

Kate chooses a different course of action when she confronts the terrorist in "Bete Noire."  AU.

Written for the If I Could Change Just One Thing challenge, the AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent challenge, and the I'll Be There for You challenge.

Spoilers for episode 01.16, "Bete Noire."



Categories: General, General > Angst, General > Drama
Characters: Ari Haswari, Caitlin "Kate" Todd, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Gerald Jackson, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Chapters: 1
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Study, Drama, Episode Tag, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Spoilers
Challenges: I'll Be There for You Challenge, If I Could Change Just One Thing Challenge, And Now For Something Completely Different Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 4508 Read Count: 2331
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2012 Updated: 01/20/2012
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/19/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I admit I'm a total sucker for Kibbs romance, but this snapshot of Kibbsy friendship is lovely, too.

Author: thecookiemomma
Rating: FR13
Summary: Gibbs starts at NIS right out of the Marine Corps. It's a totally different world, but he'll be fine.

Categories: General
Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Mike Franks, Other NCIS Character(s)
Chapters: 1
Genre: Friendship
Warnings: None
Challenges: First and/or Last Day Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 1408 Read Count: 596
[Report This] Published: 06/12/2013 Updated: 06/12/2013
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/17/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved Franks laughing at Gibbs calling him sir. Also love that you brought Magnus in - that's a really lovely piece of continuity. And Elaine too!

I cackled out loud when he said he wasn't wearing panties.

I really loved this. Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 10/21/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This will forever be my headcanon for Gibbs' first day. I have to come back and read it on a regular basis because it always makes me smile. Such a great job you did with this!



Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you dear.

Plan A  ||  Reviews - 5  ||  starstarstarstarstar Table of Contents
Author: thecookiemomma
Rating: FR13
Summary: It's not the most elegant of plans, but it works.

Categories: General, General > Humor
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Timothy McGee
Chapters: 1
Genre: Humor
Warnings: Other (See Author Notes)
Challenges: Streakers on the Run Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 719 Read Count: 781
[Report This] Published: 07/12/2013 Updated: 07/12/2013
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/13/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In character, funny, spot on for the challenge. I'm chuckling away to myself here, I can just see this (oo er) in my mind's eye and it's sooooo much fun.

For some reason the line about Tony DiNozzo in all his ... glory ... cracked me up the most. There's something about that implied delayed reaction, WTF moment there that just cracked me up completely.

Oh, and McNekkid = love. McNaked would've been funny, but McNekkid... It's perfection.

(I think part of the reason it's so amusing to me is that you've given just enough of a case file frame that my brain is busy trying to figure out how on Earth they got into this situation. Which for some reason just makes it all the funnier.)

I'm waffling! Suffice to say, I liked this, and it made me laugh a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! So glad you enjoyed. Yeah, that's kind of what I was thinking. I had friends who said, "There's a difference between 'naked' and 'nekkid.'" I don't know if I believe them, but Tony does, anyway. I hadn't fully fleshed out why, so I'm kind of wondering too. Thanks again for the read and review!

Author: fallenangel218
Rating: FR15
Summary: Tim finds himself in a tight spot when an undercover op goes south. Can he get himself out of trouble? Will the team find him?

Categories: General > Suspense, General > Action/Adventure, General
Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee
Chapters: 1
Genre: Action, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Challenges: How could I be lost? Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 1041 Read Count: 1224
[Report This] Published: 08/12/2013 Updated: 08/12/2013
Reviewer: flootzavut Signed
Date: 08/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dramatic! I'm impressed with how much you managed to pack into this oneshot.

It's cracking me up how different they all are!

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