Reviewer: Belial Signed
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I already reviewed it on ff.net but I will do it here again.
I really loved this story. You pictured Tony exactly the way I view him and I can really think about making Tate work for me.
But I also hope that in your version the events of Twillight won't happen because I think that would crush him instantly as happiness was so near and then taken from him in the cruelest fashion possible.
There wasn't much action in this story but it didn't have to be there as it was in invitation into Tonys thought and I always thought the show missed out on the recovery time which had to be more than one week for Tony.
Also I think that the show seemed to forget the fact that Tony nearly died from the plague conveniently and than bought it up again when Bishop joined (and made fun of him a few times before that) so I liked how you tried to portray the aftereffects of this illness.
Long story short, it was a great story, an even greater Xmas-present for me and I thank you for wirting it. Personally I would be sad if you really would stop writing for NCIS but I understand. The show just isn't at it's prime anymore and it's difficult to include headcanon of oneself when the show went a different direction. (at least for me it is...)