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Author: Trivette Lover Heather
Rating: FR13
Summary: Entry For Angst Challenge. "You can't protect them forever Jethro..."

Categories: General > Angst
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 1
Genre: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Angst Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 2059 Read Count: 1400
[Report This] Published: 09/18/2008 Updated: 09/18/2008
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 11/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have finally made it to read your angst entry – so sorry it’s taken me a while – I’m not around very often, and even when I am around it’s not for long! Now this is what I call angst! I shall definitely know not to enter an angst challenge again – I’m just no good at it compared to others. You really depict so well the total despair that Gibbs feels after the loss of his team, and even though it is a bleak idea, I think you are right that if it ever really did happen he would feel that his life was over – absolutely wonderful and deeply moving!

On the Rocks  ||  Reviews - 6  ||  starstarstarstar Table of Contents
Past Featured StoryAuthor: jagfanatic
Rating: FR15
Summary:

Emily Angst + Booze + Broads = Dangerous Territory
When Diane uses Emily as a pawn to get at Fornell, he discovers an unsuspected friend.

FR-15 for language & booze.
UST is Het

NFA Challenge



Categories: General > Angst
Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, T. C. Fornell, Ziva David
Chapters: 4
Genre: Angst, Friendship, UST
Warnings: None
Challenges: It Must Be Fornell Challenge
Series: Coming Undone: Characters in Crisis (a collection, not series)
Completed: Yes Word count: 2129 Read Count: 2629
[Report This] Published: 10/23/2008 Updated: 10/23/2008
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Life's a Bitch

This was excellent – so full of witty lines, clever set-ups, and fantastic chapter ‘cliff-hangers’!! Fornell waking up thinking he had been captured by Mossad was absolutely priceless, as was his reaction when Ziva turned on some lights! The first scene with Fornell and Diane was almost sad and funny at the same time – poor Tobias thinking he was losing his daughter, but then your wonderful description of fear being like blood in the water to Diane – I suddenly had this image of a red headed shark circling around both Gibbs and Fornell…..she’s a wonderful creation, but an evil creature. Tremendous story – bravo!!

Author's Response:

*claps & bounces* You liked it! Did you catch the parts alluded to in "Blitzkrieg"? :D

Yep, you got it -- I definitely see Diane as a shark. *nods* From what Gibbs & Fornell have said, she's much more predatory than the average gold-digger. To me, she comes across as a cold-blooded man-eater who searches out prey and devours men and their fortunes without mercy. I have this perverse urge to see what happens when sets her sights on Adm. Chegwidden. ;D

Author: Cable Addict
Rating: FR15
Summary: When Tony get’s scarlet fever at Tim and Abby’s wedding, what can be done?

Categories: Het, Het > DiNozzo/Ziva, Het > McGee/Abby
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 1
Genre: Romance, UST
Warnings: None
Challenges: Study in Scarlet Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 1528 Read Count: 955
[Report This] Published: 04/21/2009 Updated: 04/21/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstar
Date: 05/26/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Scarlet Fever

I really loved this – thank you so much for entering the challenge! Tony’s reactions were brilliant, as were you descriptions of the events of the day. The scene between Tony and Ziva when they nearly succumbed to passion was great! An all round excellent story – bravo!

Author: Precious Pup
Rating: FR21
Summary: This is a sequal to my story Lost Boys. It can be read on its own but I would recommend you read that one first.

This story is Gibbs/Tony/McGee in an established slash threesome with Gibbs as loving Master. There are some elements of bondage, sex toys, extensive slash sex etc.

This story is essentially a hurt/comfort fic and there will be torture and mentions of possible rape as torture so be warned. This will be a multi chapter fic but its quite involved so may take some time to update between chapters. Tim is taken during a case and Gibbs and Tony have to deal with the public and private fallout resulting from a third of their partnership missing and possibly hurt. Will they be able to heal their hurts together or will they dissolve under the weight of the damage done?

Categories: Slash / Femslash, Threesome / Moresome
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee
Chapters: 26
Genre: Angst, Dark, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Abuse, BDSM, Disturbing Imagery, Kink, Non-Con, Sex, Threesome/Moresome, Violence
Series: Lost Boys
Completed: Yes Word count: 69223 Read Count: 62326
[Report This] Published: 05/01/2009 Updated: 06/10/2010
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 05/13/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This third chapter was so intense, your description was so vivid, I could almost smell what that hell-hole must have been like for Tim. It was heartbreaking that he didn’t recognise Gibbs, and that he thought he wasn’t brave enough….the image of Gibbs walking out of that room carrying Tim, all jarring angles and elbows, that was haunting…..and the embrace between Tony and Gibbs, when there were just no words….amazing!

Author's Response: Ahhh good. You see I wanted it to be more than a sex fic. The sex is obvious of course but I want to make it an intergral part of the plot almost. Shows the different aspects of their relationship together and their personailities. And now its going to get tricky.\r\nA relationship that is based on aspects of bondage comes face to face with part of their partnership being terrified of it.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 05/11/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I’m only up to Chapter 2 with this…
Although I don’t mind reading erotica or even out and out sex (het or slash), I’m less comfortable with kink, and particularly dominant/submissive sex. Having said that I would love to be kept updated on this one. The seeds of intrigue were well and truly sown in that first chapter with the news story in Gibbs’ paper about the cop being tortured….I do want to see how everyone deals with the same kind of thing happening to Tim – especially Gibbs and Tony. As ever, your writing is wonderful, and you manage to include humour as well as some very carnal images!! Gibbs doesn’t see Tim for two weeks!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh lovely. I wasn\'t sure if you would read this as ...well lets be honest its a bit more full on that my other stuff. I do write some S & M but not stuff thats degrading or painful. More playful game playing and very supportive of their needs.

Tarot Twins  ||  Reviews - 11  ||  starstarstarstarhalf-star Table of Contents
Past Featured StoryAuthor: Emerald
Rating: FR13
Summary: The disappearance of two young twins on a Marine base shows the team a side of McGee they never knew.

Categories: General, General > Action/Adventure, General > Angst, General > Case File
Characters: Timothy McGee
Chapters: 8
Genre: Angst, Case Fic, Friendship
Warnings: None
Challenges: Twin Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 24469 Read Count: 20289
[Report This] Published: 05/30/2009 Updated: 05/30/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What an absolutely amazing story – I was gripped from start to finish. Your back-story for Tim’s phobias is brilliant; I so wanted to do terrible things to his family for letting him carry the burden of guilt all those years. The team support was beautifully done, and the tension and suspense – all excellent! I look forward to reading more of your stories – this was GREAT!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. This one flowed for me, which made it really nice, but I am looking forward to getting more stories posted soon.

Author: jagfanatic
Rating: FR15
Summary:

McGee is the victim of a devastating new method of Psi-Drilling.

Rated FR-15 for chp 4 which has supernatural non-con (more horror than realism) and gross-out imagery.



Categories: General > Angst, General > Sci-Fi/Supernatural/Fantasy, General > Suspense
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Original Character(s), Timothy McGee
Chapters: 4
Genre: Alternate Universe, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, SciFi/Supernatural/Fantasy
Warnings: Disturbing Imagery, Non-Con, Violence
Challenges: Dark Arts Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 3445 Read Count: 4108
[Report This] Published: 06/03/2009 Updated: 06/03/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chp.1: These Words, Like Daggers

Very clever!! I loved all the mythology and imagery - particularly Abby telling King Arthur to get his butt out of bed - hilarious!! By the way, she's not wrong, the way things are going over here at the moment Britain really does need Arthur!! I loved this story - the ending was brilliant!

Author's Response:

Thank you!
This is one of those stories where I only had a general idea of where the story was heading and let it write itself. My brain was in a weird place and led me on a strange and wondrous journey to that last chapter. *cuddles Timmy* Or maybe I've just been reading too many stories of Teri's? (aka Enthusiastic Fish) :D

Blitzkrieg  ||  Reviews - 3  ||  starstarstarstarstar Table of Contents
Author: jagfanatic
Rating: FR15
Summary:

Diane was good at keeping secrets. Secrets were the ammunition she used to get what she wanted and to get revenge. This time she pulled out the Big Guns. She forgot that when misused, ammunition can blow up in your face.



Categories: General > Drama
Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, T. C. Fornell, Ziva David
Chapters: 3
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship
Warnings: None
Series: Coming Undone: Characters in Crisis (a collection, not series), Surprising Gibbs (variations on a theme)
Completed: Yes Word count: 5294 Read Count: 2518
[Report This] Published: 06/13/2009 Updated: 06/15/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 Title: Chapter 1: (A One-Shot)

What a wonderful story! And what an absolute witch Diane was! The revenge was brilliantly done, and using Rabb – excellent….The description of Diane’s reaction to the numerous court papers was marvellous – I could picture so vividly her frenzied reaction – of course the final paragraph was just perfection….

Author's Response:

Thank you for the praise. I'm kind of fond of that last paragraph ,myself. *blows kisses* 

Poor Diane. *snort* She's the Erica Kane of NCIS -- the woman everyone loves to hate. Rabb... *swoon* I love using JAG characters when I can. I keep thinking I need to have Gibbs come across Adm. Chegwidden, Ret. at the Marina. We know he has a boat. @_@ and a bee-you-tea-full daughter who can dish it out as good as Rabb. hmmmm.... Francesca & Tony? *snicker* He wouldn't knoww hat hit him. lol

btw:
I don't know if you've read "On the Rocks," but "Blitzkrieg" alludes to events in that story. Even though I didn't start out to write a sequel, I found myself incorporating them. It's another Drunk!Fornell story. *sheepish grin* Poor guy, I'm as awful to him and Teri is to Timmy. ;D

Author: writingfreak145
Rating: FR13
Summary: Crossover with Picket Fences. The team including Sophia and Jen. Well you'll just have to read to find out what it's about.

Categories: General > Family, Het > Gibbs/Jenny, General > Humor
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Crossover Character(s), Jenny Shepard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 1
Genre: Crossover, Fluff, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Spoilers
Challenges: Romance Gone Awry challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 4606 Read Count: 561
[Report This] Published: 06/19/2009 Updated: 06/19/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstar
Date: 07/20/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a really cute story - I've never seen Picket Fences, but I still enjoyed all the NCIS interractions - excellent.

Author: jagfanatic
Rating: FR15
Summary:

McGee's at the mercy of a serial killer.

 



Categories: General > Angst
Characters: Original Character(s), Timothy McGee
Chapters: 1
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Dark
Warnings: Disturbing Imagery, Kink, Other (See Author Notes), Violence
Challenges: Why Are You Torturing McGee? Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 894 Read Count: 2623
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2009 Updated: 08/27/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Strength and Weakness

This is a wonderful story so vivid and intense – I could almost feel the blows as they rained down on Tim – Tony’s response to the situation was perfect, and as for Gibbs…“It wasn't the steely-eyed glare he was used to, there was some indecipherable emotion clamoring in them.” Bravo!!!

Who We Are  ||  Reviews - 2  ||  starstarstarstar Table of Contents
Author: fictionnaire
Rating: FR7
Summary: McGee has a dream about who Tony and Gibbs remind him most of.

Categories: General, General > Crack!Fic
Characters: Timothy McGee
Chapters: 1
Genre: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: It Was Only a Dream Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 1008 Read Count: 699
[Report This] Published: 10/10/2009 Updated: 10/10/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 10/21/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Who We Are

As someone old enough to remember the old Battlestar Galactica with affection, although I do love the new version – I thought this was great. Tony and Tim’s alter egos fit so well – the moral compass was hilarious – and Tony’s final comment – spot on!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I vaguely remember watching BSG as a kid. But a couple of months ago, I had the privilege of seeing the original actors in person. Shook hands with Herb (boomer) yeah they do fit so well. And yeah I believe McGee is the moral compass of the show at times. Tony\'s final comment was taken from the simpsons when Lisa screams out \"Let me help you George Washington\" and Bart is walking by says. \"Let me help you George Washington. Even your dreams are nerdy\"

Past Featured StoryAuthor: jagfanatic
Rating: FR15
Summary:

With Gibbs away, Tony and Fornell find common ground.

 

RATED: FR-15 for booze.
SPOILERS: S3-22/23, "Hiatus Pt. 1 & 2"



Categories: General, General > Family
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, T. C. Fornell
Chapters: 1
Genre: Character Study, Friendship
Warnings: None
Challenges: Our FBI Favorite: Agent Fornell! Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 936 Read Count: 1447
[Report This] Published: 10/14/2009 Updated: 10/14/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/25/2009 Title: Chapter 1: (one-shot)

This was so sad, but life-affirming at the same time, if that doesn't sound too strange. I loved that Fornell didn't have a problem with Tony's feelings for Gibbs - and your portrayal of Tony's feelings of loss - absolutely brilliant!!

Author's Response:

"Sad, but life-affirming..." I can live with that! :-* Not to mention, "brilliant". Thank you for the compliment.

Fornell is a lot like Gibbs. Both can be harsh, but neither is cruel. I think that even if Fornell dispised the idea, enough of his relationships have had tragic endings that he can sympathize. Any shouting he had to do would be held back until Tony (or whoever) was able to handle it. In a situation like this, involving team members, his anger would most likely be directed at the one with the most seniority.

Author: Deathonengineers
Rating: FR7
Summary: When their plane crashes in an artic wilderness, Tim, Tony and Ziva's lives are in a new kind of danger.

Categories: General
Characters: Timothy McGee
Chapters: 1
Genre: Friendship
Warnings: None
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 10617 Read Count: 2900
[Report This] Published: 10/28/2009 Updated: 10/28/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful!! Tim 'dream walking' and saving Tony and Ziva in the process...your descriptions are excellent, and you nailed the characters - Vance was particularly brilliant!! The ending was terrific - I look forward to reading more of your NCIS fics!

Author: Miss_Barbara
Rating: FR7
Summary: Someone from Tony´s past comes to visit him.

Categories: Het
Characters: Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo
Chapters: 1
Genre: Character Study
Warnings: None
Challenges: Family Matters Challenge
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 1250 Read Count: 714
[Report This] Published: 10/31/2009 Updated: 10/31/2009
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 11/02/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great fun! I love how you had the tour group being slightly 'rushed' by Tim, and then Steve being so downhearted when he thought Tony was ignoring him - and the end was terrific, super story!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I noticed that there are a few errors in this fiction, so I fixed that.

Author: Deathonengineers
Rating: FR7
Summary: A surveillance operation gone wrong leaves McGee in the hands of drug-dealing gang members.

Categories: General, General > Family
Characters: Timothy McGee
Chapters: 1
Genre: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 8105 Read Count: 1746
[Report This] Published: 01/11/2010 Updated: 01/11/2010
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/15/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful!! The children's situation was painted so vividly, and their care of Tim was wonderful...sharing their blanket, loved it!! And they're now part of our NCIS family...I would love to see more stories with these characters!!

Author: Smartkid37
Rating: FR18
Summary:

Trying to hold the pain inside is keeping someone on Team Gibbs just one step away from falling over the edge. Can the team reach out to him in time? Will it be enough to save him from himself?

Tag: Can't give it away.



Categories: General, General > Angst, General > Drama
Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony "Tony" DiNozzo, Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, Jethro the dog, Jimmy Palmer, Leon Vance, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Original Character(s), Sarah McGee, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Chapters: 32
Genre: Angst, Dark, Drama, Episode Tag, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Other (See Author Notes)
Series: None
Completed: Yes Word count: 75426 Read Count: 24577
[Report This] Published: 01/22/2010 Updated: 04/02/2010
Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

I'm enjoying this a lot! Intrigued to know what is troubling Tim so much...poor Jethro, he's having a bad time lately...I killed him off in a recent story!! Update soon please!!

Author's Response:

I am honored by your review. I love your work. I killed both Tim and Jethro off in one of my earlier stories, myself. THe sequel of which is still a wip.

Thank you so much and I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 01/25/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

Loving Tony and Gibbs' concern, but they really need to talk to Tim properly...not that he's likely to enjoy that, perhaps Ducky can help!

I'm wondering how Abby will react to Tim giving Jethro away...hopefully she'll work out that he must have had good reason. Looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/31/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

He's not getting any better is he? Time for team Gibbs to get to the bottom of this and help Tim...great chapter - looking forward to more...

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Sorry it took me so long to respond.
I appreciate your reading this and reviewing it.
It means a lot to me.

 

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/13/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

That was a really tough chapter to read, but in a good way! You portrayed Tim's pain so vividly, and Gibbs' reaction to the scene that greeted him when he entered the apartment - superb!

Author's Response:

Thank you.
hope you like the rest of it as well.
I appreciate you reading it and reviewing it.
Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

Wonderful!! I think you're doing a great job with Tony...he needs to help Tim now, they all do. That scene in the shower was amazing, I hope it's the last time Tim feels the need to harm himself that way.

The teams needs to rally round him now, and Tim needs to tell them what is causing his 'meltdown'. I am loving this story so much!!

Author's Response: Wow. thank you!
Here I was beginning to think I was dragging it out too much.
I am happy to hear you're enjoying it.
Coming from one of my favorite authors on this site; that's a huge compliment.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/15/2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh...two chapters to read – excellent!!
Chapter 17
Way to go Gibbs!! A few home truths shouldn’t hurt anyone, and Tony took his ‘medicine’ well…as for Abby!! This is one of those times when I would willingly slap her! ‘You’re on Timmy’s side!’ This isn’t the school playground Abby, a man’s mental health is as stake!
Rant over…calming down enough to say, this was a wonderful chapter…

Chapter 18
Wow...wow...wow!! This is an absolutely incredible chapter...the Abby and Ducky conversation was really good. But Gibbs overhearing what Tim and Tony were discussing...staggeringly good...all that guilt built up over so long...you brought in so many canon moments, and when you put them together like that, it’s easy to see how Tim could finally be on the point of crumbling under the pressure he has put on himself. Quite amazing!!

Author's Response:

Thank you.
17th story and Chapter 18 was the first time I made myself cry. Although 7 and 13 came close.
thank you for reading and reviewing.
so glad  you like it.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

Chasm’s Edge
Oh my word! That was so sad…how terrible to be forced to carry that burden through life – the idea that you had been responsible for the death of your mother…and how hateful of his father to say such a thing! No wonder Tim carries such an emotional load around.

The interactions between the three of them are so well written, and I can quite see that Gibbs and Tony would both act outside of their ‘normal’ personas in order to find out what is wrong with Tim. Really wonderful!!

Author's Response:

Thank you.
Coming from you, one of my favorite authors, that means a lot.
Your encouragements help keep me going.
Thtanks.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

It's good to see Gibbs finally saying sorry, and trying to put right some of the wrongs that have been done to Tim. Putting up the fence so that Tim could get Jethro back was a lovely touch...and I hope we get to see Abby's converstaion with Tim, she needs to be very careful what she says...such a beautifully angsty story, amazing work!!

Author's Response:

Thank you.

so glad you're still with me on it.

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh my....intense!!! Love Gibbs and Tony being so protective, and Abby finally getting with the programme! She needs to work out what is wrong and put it right fast!! Tim needs them all to be onside, another wonderful update.

Author's Response:

Thank you. It took me all week to get it where I was happy with it.
I was afraid everyone wasgoing  too OOC.
Glad it turned out right.

 

Reviewer: Fingersnaps Signed
Date: 03/15/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Searching for An Escape

Take your time with the updates, family comes first!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

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